Almost half way through the course!
I guess that depends on how you look at it? We’ve only just completed the first quarter 🙂
Good work on the assignment.
You can notice that the phrases that are more unusual, sensory and/or emotional have most impact:
His presentation was totally superficial => not so strong
He gave a rotten presentation => much stronger
He fumbled through the presentation => also much stronger
I like the changes to yoru blog post. What do you think?
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.