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May 7, 2014 at 2:17 pm
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Keymaster
Excellent work, Alissa. I like the changes to your blog post sentences. “Things are going swimmingly” is one of my favourite expressions. (Perhaps because I love swimming?).
I also like your use of Bam!
You manage to make your writing more interesting without going over the top.
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.