Good work on the flabby phrases. And I also like your word choices.
A couple of sentences can still be tightened a little more:
Very interesting. Let’s take a minute to think about what this means for students in college.
=> Interesting. But what does it mean for college students?
And we think it makes our lives better.
=> Referring back to “technology” in the beginning of the previous paragraph might be a little confusing. Consider: And we think technology makes our lives better.
But it seems our beloved technology is not serving us well in the classroom.
=> But our beloved technology doesn’t seem to serve us well in the classroom.
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