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=> I agree with you – this doesn’t really arouse curiosity. Also, you don’t necessarily need a subhead so quickly, so you could skip it?
It’s amazing how listing your subheads separately, makes you look at them with different (more critical!) eyes, isn’t it?
I agree with your suggestions for changing the last two subheads.
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