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Reply To: Pnina- Module 5

Home › Forums › Enchanting Business Blogging – Spring 2014 › Group B › Pnina- Module 5 › Reply To: Pnina- Module 5

May 13, 2014 at 9:00 pm #1062
Henneke
Keymaster

I like this one:

5 simple ways to overcome mood swings

“Overcoming mood swings” is a clear benefit; and “mood swings” is a power phrase that would attract any parent whose child suffers from mood swings.

I prefer the above to the headline Mood swings: 5 simple ways to overcome them, because the latter ends with a rather weak “them”. It’s better to end with a word that has a real meaning.

If you’d like to include herbal remedies, then I wouldn’t put it in brackets, but include it like this:

5 Herbal Remedies That Can Overcome Mood Swings
5 Simple Herbal Remedies That Can Overcome Mood Swings


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