Without changing the content I’ll see if I can make the existing content more readable, engaging and helpful.
That’s what this module is about, so don’t worry if you don’t like the content. You can still change the tone of the article – even if you don’t like the content.
Try kicking out (or changing) some of the passive sentences and reduce your average number of words per sentence to below 14.
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.