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Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 5

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May 20, 2014 at 11:05 pm #1106
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Henneke
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I agree with you – the approach of the headline is interesting, but the original is probably a little too generic to really appeal to people.

I prefer your idea of getting your inbox to zero – that’s a far more specific benefit. I would swap around “proven” and “3-part”:

The Proven 3-Part Process to Get Your Inbox to Zero

A few alternatives:
How to Get your Inbox to Zero: A Proven 3-Step Formula
3 Simple Tricks to Get Your Inbox to Zero

My feeling is that a 3-part process sounds more long-winded than a 3-step formula or 3 proven tricks. It’s a subtle difference. But it’s worth keeping in mind that most readers are attracted to posts that offer easy solutions that don’t require too much effort.


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