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Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 6

Home › Forums › Enchanting Business Blogging – Spring 2014 › Group A › Mohammed Ali – Module 6 › Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 6

May 25, 2014 at 12:42 pm #1126
Henneke
Keymaster

Good analysis; you’ve quickly turned yourself into a detective. 🙂

“I don’t want to give you advice like that” arises curiosity, and that I’ll be getting something different by reading this.

Yep, this is a smart way to show that this won’t be a one-in-a-dozen post with the same useless advice.

Instead of writing the sentence “Or just ask any author on a book deadline…” [which moves the conversation away from the reader to “authors with a book deal” => and how many CB readers can identify with that?], it would have been much better to empathize with the reader.

PS I don’t even understand what he means with his thousand-yard stare?


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