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Good to see you’re back, Arif 🙂
(although not grammatically perfect, but would work in a blog post, wouldn’t it?)
I don’t work for the grammar police, so I’m fine with it. If you’re unsure, you could go for “His presentation stunk” or “His presentation was stinky”.
I’ve used the word “stinky” in a headline a couple of times, and it seems to attract attention and boost open rates / click throughs from social media.
When you use a phrase that’s unusual, your writing becomes more interesting. “her problems would even knock the wind out of superman”, for instance, is more interesting than “Make sure you’ve got your hand around your wallet.”
Good start on your return!
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