Enchanting Courses

  • Home
  • About
  • Contact me
  • Forums
  • Student Login
  • Logout

by 

Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 7

Home › Forums › Enchanting Business Blogging – Spring 2014 › Group A › Mohammed Ali – Module 7 › Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 7

June 2, 2014 at 11:15 pm #1161
Avatar
Henneke
Keymaster

Sean d’Souza’s posts are almost always well-structured as your outline shows.

What did you think of the opening paragraphs of this post?

I felt they were a little dull, and he assumes his readers understand what he means with strategic alliances and why you need them.

I prefer how you’ve written down the big idea for this post – why not write about “important people” and avoid confusion about “strategic alliances”?


Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.

© 2014-2021  Enchanting Courses · All Rights Reserved