Ah, you’re right about the negative statement. I would rather address Sarah in a positive way.
(You can get carried away with “smart word use”. After reading the cheat-sheet I loved the contrast of cold versus vibrant.)
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I had thought of shorten it like you did, but thought I needed to tell what you’re gonna do with it (grow effortless).
Now I am roaming through the magazine.com site. A good recommendation as you can see all the catchy headlines, thank you for that! You can see extremely well how all the writers try to make it short (sometimes very short!) and catchy. Let’s see how I can use it for my Sarah. Till now I found good examples with Astronomy and Garden/living magazines…
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