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Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 7

Home › Forums › Enchanting Business Blogging – Spring 2014 › Group A › Mohammed Ali – Module 7 › Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 7

June 4, 2014 at 1:13 pm #1182
Mohammed V
Participant

Hi Henneke,

Thanks for the feedback.

I felt they were a little dull, and he assumes his readers understand what he means with strategic alliances and why you need them.

I also didn’t like the use of the term ‘strategic alliances’. I was thinking how to improve the intro, and you made a good point ie explain ‘why’ you need them. He’s got Brian Tracy’s testimonial on his website. He could have mentioned that his ‘alliance’ resulted in getting a testimonial.

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