I liked the storytelling, but I found it went a bit long
Yes, I agree. Stories need to be rigorously edited. And that can be tricky.
Create a Sensory Experience
Master the Parts of Speech
Employ a Thesaurus
I’d immediately lose interest if I was skimming this post. I much prefer your subheads!
Good work, Alissa.
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.