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Reply To: Alissa Robson – Module 7

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June 7, 2014 at 7:02 pm #1196
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Henneke
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Great topic, and I’m sure it’ll speak strongly to Linda.

Your outline is great – the flow is logical with lots of practical information.

Your subheads feel like they’re summing up your key points, rather than encouraging people like Linda to read on. With a little tweaking you can make the subheads more enticing:

Over 40? Welcome Aboard
=> Perhaps: Over 40? Why young companies need you

If Bill Gates Is Cool, So Are You
=> Perhaps: How to be as cool as Bill Gates

Ditch the Urban Dictionary – Be Yourself Instead
=> Perhaps: Why you should ditch the Urban Dictionary

It’s Okay That The Kids Are Trying It (And You Can, Too)
=> Perhaps: How to keep up (without wasting your time)

What Mom Said Is True
=> I like this one. Makes me curious.


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