“Your life will be hectic and crazy and loud and full of shouting and frustration and love.”
This is a great sentence because it sounds so hectic with all the and‘s. You can almost hear the noise of a busy household.
I found that the “You hope.” line kind of undid everything for me.
Yep, I agree. I wonder what the intention of the writer was?
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