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Reply To: Jonas – Module 9

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June 19, 2014 at 4:01 pm #1261
Henneke
Keymaster

Kind of a long sentence, but…

It’s fine to have long sentences occasionally 🙂 It reads fine. You can slightly shorten it:

Kind of like when your uncle Ray, the raging alcoholic, actually DOESN’T make a pass at the maid of honor during the wedding.

Sorry for my slow reply. I’ve been on vacation and tried to limit my working hours. 🙂


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