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June 22, 2014 at 1:22 pm
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Great choice for an opening paragraph. Yes, there’s lots of empathy and I love how the author uses specific examples.
The promise seems implicit. The writer tells us there’s a giant conspiracy leading us to look for balance, which makes us feel we’re always falling short. We’re expecting the author to tell us what to do instead so we don’t feel like we’re screwing up all the time.
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