Thank you!
Absolutely, I’m going to have to change my subheads… and remove the fluff.
“There” is just as unspecific in Hebrew. I’ll remove it 🙂
Moving right on to today’s assignment. I currently don’t have a bonus.
I could create a list of recommended sensory items they could use at home (“snoezelen at home”). It’s a post I planned to write- but maybe I should use it as a “bribe” instead?
If I do, I could add a report about the importance of play, and the importance of touch (to sensory integration and emotional development- not using this language!).
My copy could be:
Create a snoezelen-like experience at home:
Help your child relax, sleep better, and communicate better (and have fun at the same time!).
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And now for my opt-ins (I sprinkled them all over!)
Sidebar opt-in:
Original:
Join here to receive updates on new posts (free and with all my heart)
**The “all my heart” part sounds much better in Hebrew…
New:
Join here to receive updates (free and with all my heart)- Learn how to help your child improve, and how to stay motivated.
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About page opt-in: In here I have a paragraph preceding my opt-in form. It says:
In the blog and emails I send- there’s a lot of useful information, interviews with therapists from different approaches, stories of parents and kids on the spectrum, and lots of inspiration for the happy days, and the tough ones. They arrive not more than once a week- because I know your time is precious.
New:
In the blog and emails I send I want to help you help your child improve, and stay motivated in the process. I do that by sharing tips, interviews with therapists from different approaches, stories of parents and kids on the spectrum, and nuggets of inspiration for the happy days, and the tough ones. They arrive not more than once a week- because I know your time is precious.
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Contact me page opt-in:
Join here to receive emails from me (not more than once a week) with useful information, stories of parents and kids on the spectrum, interviews with therapists and a lot of inspiration for the happy days, and the tough ones (free and with all my heart)
New:
Join here to receive emails from me (not more than once a week) to help your child improve. I’m sending tips, stories of parents and kids on the spectrum, interviews with therapists and nuggets of inspiration to keep you motivated on the happy days, and the tough ones (free and with all my heart)
**Is it too long?..
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Under a post opt-in:
Don’t miss the next post! Sign up for updates (free and with all my heart)
Since it’s underneath a post- I could create my “bribe” and use it there, for further reading and connection with people who took the time to read a post all the way to the end.