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I love your idea for the intro and the outline has a logical flow.
I understand you don’t want to create too much hype with your subheads, but I feel the current subheads are perhaps a little harsh and factual. The lack a sensory touch, a little subtle.
What about something about “How to let your mind wander back” instead of “Routine for inspiration”?
Or instead of “clarity through structure” consider a referring to a pattern that you’ve found by organizing your pictures, e.g. you might have found a series of images that remind you of lavender, so you call this section “The scent of lavender”. This feels a little more poetic.
These are just suggestions to consider. You have to following your own gut feeling about what’s right for Sarah and how you want your voice to sound.
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