Thanks for the feedback. I’m trying to express in short bullet points the benefits of reading Sufi Comics, which can be used for the optin as well as in other places.
* Spiritual Comics that nurture your Soul
* Learn Spiritual wisdom that you can apply to life
* Discover how to attain inner peace despite life’s challenges
And I’m also trying to put the benefits in one/two sentences:
Spiritual Comics that help you attain inner peace, despite life’s challenges. Nurture your soul with spiritual wisdom.
I know it’s not there yet. I feel stuck. Any ideas how the above can be improved?