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Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 10

Home › Forums › Enchanting Business Blogging – Spring 2014 › Group A › Mohammed Ali – Module 10 › Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 10

July 2, 2014 at 3:43 pm #1352
Mohammed V
Participant

Hi Henneke,

Thanks for the feedback. I’m trying to express in short bullet points the benefits of reading Sufi Comics, which can be used for the optin as well as in other places.

* Spiritual Comics that nurture your Soul
* Learn Spiritual wisdom that you can apply to life
* Discover how to attain inner peace despite life’s challenges

And I’m also trying to put the benefits in one/two sentences:

Spiritual Comics that help you attain inner peace, despite life’s challenges. Nurture your soul with spiritual wisdom.

I know it’s not there yet. I feel stuck. Any ideas how the above can be improved?
thanks!

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