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Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 10

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July 2, 2014 at 5:26 pm #1353
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Henneke
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* Spiritual Comics that nurture your Soul
* Learn Spiritual wisdom that you can apply to life
* Discover how to attain inner peace despite life’s challenges

Try to follow the same format with your bullet points. For instance:

* Nurture your Soul with spiritual comics
* Receive nuggets of wisdom and become more content with your life [not sure this is the right benefit, but “apply to life” is too vague; also you want to avoid repeating the word spiritual]
* Discover how to find inner peace despite life’s challenges

Spiritual Comics that help you attain inner peace, despite life’s challenges. Nurture your soul with spiritual wisdom.

This is pretty good, but you want to avoid repeating the word spiritual twice. Depending on where you use it, you also may want to start with a verb. E.g.:

Get spiritual comics to help find inner peace, despite your challenges in life. Nurture your soul with nuggets of wisdom and a dash of humor.

Or:

Nurture your soul with nuggets of wisdom and a dash of humor. Sufi comics help you find inner peace in a hectic life.
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Does this help getting unstuck?


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