Turning The Pain of Excuses into The Seeds of Greatness
=> This is a “how to” headline in disguise. I’d think it’d be better starting with how to: How to Turn the Pain of Excuses Into the Seeds of Greatness
How to eat slower and more mindfully
=> Are people looking to eat slower? Or is the benefit how to eat mindfully?
What drives a person to suicide?
=> suicide is a very powerful word (but I’m not sure the word “drive” on its own is a power word as its rather mundane; it only becomes powerful because it’s used together with suicide). This is not really a how-to or list headline 🙂
Which is your favorite of your 12 headlines?
1. How to write a blockbuster business plan in one day!
=> I think this is the best one. I like the specificity of writing a business plan in one day, and the powerword “blockbuster” gives it just the right amount of attention-grabbing power.
5. How to not take your time doing a business plan.
=> be careful with “how to not…” as it’s often difficult to grasp the meaning at a glance.
7. 17 rip-roaring steps to writing your business plan in one day.
=> I love the word “rip-roaring”, but I’m not sure it works here, as you want simple steps to write a blockbuster business plan.
What’s the specific benefit for your last series of headlines?
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.