Excellent stuff. I like both #7 and #11. I like the word “sniffles” in #11.
Guess Henneke would say it’s too long for a headline. But I never really thought about there being special health tips for the *transition from summer to autumn* before – makes the specificity of the benefit really stand out for me.
Yep, I’d say that’s too long, but can be easily shortened (as a variation on your #12):
How to Keep Glowing When Autumn Arrives
or perhaps: How to Keep Your Summer Glow When Autumn Arrives
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.