O.K here are my Headlines for my topic ‘Health’ (yes Henneke, I know I have changed it, but this topic reflects my headlines better).
1. Overweight? Discover the 3 hormones responsible and make them work in your favour.
2. 3 Hormones responsible for you being overweight and what you can do.
3. Turbo charge your metabolism by correcting these 3 hormones.
4. Naturopathic Doctor targets 3 powerful hormones and loses weight fast.
5. Discover the extraordinary ‘Hormone Diet’ improving health and wellbeing.
6. Want better ‘health’? Balance these 3 powerful hormones to get rid of headaches, increase energy and have healthier looking skin.
7. Look HOT when you instantly burn unwanted fat by increasing your metabolism.
8. Understanding these 3 hormones improved my health and love life.
9. Doctor discovers secret to weight lose, targets 3 hormones responsible.
10. Extraordinary Hormone Diet guarantees weight lose and healthy body function from head to toe.
11. Want to look Hot & Sexy? Doctor discovers 3 hormones responsible.
12. Look Hot & Sexy when you follow this free diet plan.
My favorites would be; 5,9 and 10.
My next 12
1. How To Achieve a Healthy Body Weight WITHOUT Dieting.
2. 1,000’s achieve better heath with unique diet discovered by Naturopath.
3. How I lost 30 lbs, gained more energy and feel great WITHOUT dieting.
4. Revolutionary diet helps 1,000s restore health, gain more energy and improve metabolism.
5. New research discovers 3 hormones to help you lose weight.
6. Conquer the 7 factors responsible for poor health and preventing weight lose.
7. Discover which hormones are fat-burning friends and which are foes.
8. Uncover the 5 key nutrients we all need for optimal health.
9. Revolutionary 3 step program helps renew, replenish and restore health.
10. Official Research Discovers How to Control Your Appetite for Lasting Weight Loss Success.
11. Lose Fat, Feel Calmer, and Get Stronger by gaining Control of your hormonal balance.
12. Lose Fat, Feel Sexier, and Sleep Better, by gaining Control of your hormonal balance.
13. Sugar is Pure, White and Deadly, overcome cravings and live healthier.
My fav’s in this list are; 1, 3, 6 and 13 (bakers dozen)
I know they are all a little long, so i would value any critically honest feedback on the content. To give some background as to the type of headlines I am trying to write; I am a partner in a Herbal Tea business. We have a weightloss tea that has been created by a Naturopathic doctor and is a wonderful product according to people who have tried it. We now need to market it, however, my focus is not so much on weight loss as good health, the tea does help people lose weight, but it also has a wonderful effect on balancing our hormones and helping us feel more energetic and better within. So whilst I have included headlines that could be seen to be appealing to body image, I am more concerned with the promotion of good health.