Hi Henneke, yes I agree with your analysis, the word extraordinary would most likely cause people to scoff and consider it hype.
Yep right about the word ‘correcting’ balancing would be a better choice. One thing I need to overcome is my grammatically correct voice and I hope this course helps me do that.
I also liked Jessica’s suggestion and plan to use it.
I have noted the advice with regard to ‘How to’ and agree that it is very powerful, we are all looking for the ‘How to’s’ that will improve our lives.
I threw No 13 in as test case as it is partly the title of a book I am reading and I am glad I did as your suggestions have given me much food for thought for future headlines. 🙂