by Reply To: Sue – Module 3 Home › Forums › Test Drive I › Group A › Sue – Module 3 › Reply To: Sue – Module 3 March 3, 2014 at 9:20 pm #317 HennekeKeymaster Yes, that’s a good starting point. Perhaps challenge yourself to get to 12 words per sentence tomorrow and then compare the two versions to see what you think? Did you have any passive sentences? Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.
