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Reply To: Zsuzsi – Module 3

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March 14, 2014 at 1:41 pm #365
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Zsuzsi S
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Day 3. I was thinking that may sentences might be too short already? (10.8 words per sentence?) After adding some rhythm now it’s 10.4!! Aren’t they too short??

Here are the changes. Day 2 text is bold, Day 3 text is italic.

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The only advantage of having extra people around is if you want to grow your Facebook page.

Pages with more fans always have more authority in the eyes of the fans.

The only advantage of having extra people around is if you want to your Page to be larger. More fans, more respect.

Agree?

Pages with more fans always have more authority in the eyes of the fans.

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“Yeah, I want customers, let’s give away an iPad!” It sounds easy, but it doesn’t work like this.

“Yeah, I want customers, let’s give away an iPad!”

Hmmm.

It sounds easy, but it doesn’t work like this.

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If someone want to win your product, then he might also buy it too. So why not offer something that you actually sell?

If someone want to win your product, then he might also buy it too.

So offer something that you actually sell.

Why not?

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The best thing was that they converted 25% of subscribers into paying customers. It turned out that so many people suffer from migraine!

Their secret was that after the contest their emails and landing pages worked very well. People could recognize the symptoms of migraines on themselves and realize that the company can help.

The best thing was that they converted 25% of subscribers into paying customers.

Great numbers!

It turned out that so many people suffer from migraine!

It’s actually bad.

Anyway, their secret was that Migravent’s emails and landing pages worked very well after the contest. People could recognize the symptoms of migraines on themselves and realize that the company can help.

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