Great feedback as usual, thanks so much! Yes, that’s one thing that’s tough for me. I want to finish the section that same day so I can be ready for tomorrow’s when it comes. I definitely wouldn’t publish any work that way. It’d have to sit at least overnight. I think I’ll start doing that with these longer assignments here.
The picture I was trying to paint was –
The guy sees his conversions have tanked. Then he traces the damages back to his USP (which sucks). I’ll clean this up for Thursday:)
I like the part about making them wait for the UHP..
Ok, I’ll give this another shot minana:)