by Reply To: Zsuzsi – Module 6 Home › Forums › Test Drive I › Group A › Zsuzsi – Module 6 › Reply To: Zsuzsi – Module 6 April 8, 2014 at 12:51 pm #513 HennekeKeymaster Yes, Derek’s opening is a good one. He’s a smart writer. Did you notice he also starts with a short sentence? Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.
