Great work! A few suggestions:
Are you charging enough? 7 easy steps to calculate how much your product will cost
=> Are you too cheap? would be more powerful than Are you charging enough?.
How Artists Can Apply Youtility Marketing
=> This headline only works if your audience knows what Youtility marketing is and is keen to learn it.
11 Ways to Work Through Your Grief and Return to the Studio
=> Grief is a power word as it’s emotional, and I agree it would be good to add another power word as the headline fizzles out as return to the studio is quite flat. It would be good to introduce some contrast with “grief”.
How to Draw Raptors on Toned Paper- Exploring Contrast
=>This headline is super-specific and that’s why it might work for the right audience. I would have been more excited about reading this post if the headline told me the tutorial is easy (5 easy steps…) or if it would teach me to draw impressive or beautiful raptors. This is how power words could be added.
I love the time-stealers and blog envy headlines!
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.