Good start, Lori
How to Take a Vacation Without Abandoning Your Business
=> I’m even wondering whether “vacation” is a power word? For many solo-entrepreneurs the idea of vacation can sound like paradise. A simple, but powerful headline.
5 Ways To Work Out Like A World-Champion Surfer — No Ocean Necessary
=> This headline arouses curiosity. But I’m wondering whether the benefit is specific enough. Perhaps: 5 Ways to Work Out Like a World-Champion Surfer (in Your Back Garden!)
I also like the phrase “avoiding the wrath of Google” – that’s very powerful.
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.