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Reply To: Zsuzsi – Module 7

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April 15, 2014 at 11:16 am #617
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Henneke
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Good job, Zsuzsi.

You are about to make the first move to your new customers.

You can make this stronger by simply saying:

Make your first move to gaining new customers.

[and then you might want to refer back to keeping Tom’s boss happy – which is something he worries about, doesn’t he?]

Arise their attention.

Sweep them off their feet.

And keep you boss happy.


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