“You don’t have to be 30 years old and have hair to launch your own business!”
I’m with Mary. I love this sentence, too. I’m just not sure it’ll do well as a headline because you have to read each word and get to the end before you realize what this is about – that makes it tricky to attract attention in social media. Most people don’t take the time to read headlines (and email subject lines) – unless they know you.
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.