Hey Mike, I’m getting caught up by commenting on the group’s post first. Please don’t be shy about telling me whether you find it helpful or not. I’m hoping for the same kind of feedback on my headlines.
7 Insider Secrets of starting your own successful business today, no matter what your age
This is ONE of my favorites. You’ve got quite a nice list there. How could it be better? My Toastmaster evaluation hat is on.
7 Sure-fire Secrets to Starting Your Successful Online Business Today–No Maximum Age Requirement.
I loved the alliteration in your version. I just added another “S” word and made it more specific with the addition of “online” since that seemed to be a theme of some of your other headlines. The “No Maximum Age Requirement” is a play on the “Some Minimum Age Requirement” fine print. Alternatively, it could play on “Some Age Restrictions” to read “No Age Restrictions.” Just brainstorming.
So with Toastmasters, if you aren’t familiar with it, we commonly take a strong piece and try to find 3 improvements. It is meant to help both the person making the critique as well as the person getting the critique. Again, if this is just plain irritating just let me know. No worries.
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