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Reply To: Jonas – Module 8

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April 21, 2014 at 7:16 pm #773
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Henneke
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Yeah, you shoulda been a detective or something. Never thought a blog post could be dissected and studied as much as I’ve seen from you.

That’s how I’ve learned to write 🙂

Great AWAI headlines and perfect analysis. I like your outline, too. This could be a great post.

“Let’s find your weird” & “How to Amplify Your Weirdness” are more curiosity arousing than promising a benefit – you may want to be a little careful. When people just scan your subheads before reading, they may decide this post is just about being weird and there’s no benefit about it apart from the conclusion.

Will you empathize with Dan in the opening? That’s not quite clear from your outline.


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