Excellent profile, Pnina.
It’s very vivid – I can visualize Sharon waking up in the night worrying about her son.
What about Maya? Is she worried about her, too? Is she concerned that she spends too much time with Yair and doesn’t devote enough time to Maya (or to her husband)?
It can be useful to consider Sharon’s challenges in a slightly wider perspective – you’ve touched on some points like she’s afraid to lose her friends already.
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