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Reply To: Zsuzsi – Module 7

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April 23, 2014 at 9:41 pm #817
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Henneke
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I like it. A few minor suggestions:

See, these things above [replace by something more specific] are not super hard.

Your contest can attract thousands of the right people. And you and your boss can be will be happy.

Take your time to find a theme that really fits your audience. Once done, talk about it in a very few words [not sure what you mean with this?], and make it a no brainer to enter your contest.

Make it simple.

It will be Make it a success.

[adding a white line & repeating “make it” adds extra stress to your last sentences]


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