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April 24, 2014 at 9:10 am
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Yup, marketspace is gobbledygook, and you can just delete it here without changing the meaning of your sentence.
It’s a good start. You can take your purpose probably one step further…
I want to help members of the education industry (like Linda) take advantage of emerging technologies so that they ….
Can improve student engagement?
Can get more students?
Find it easier to manage their job?
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