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April 28, 2014 at 10:02 pm
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Adverb should be used with care. Fewer adverbs is usually better.
Rather than say “he walked quickly”, you might prefer “he ran”.
Adverbs aren’t always bad. You can use them to add stress, e.g.
“She was breathtakingly beautiful.”
I find the Hemmingway app a little to prescriptive at times. Use it with care.
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