by Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 3 Home › Forums › Enchanting Business Blogging – Spring 2014 › Group A › Mohammed Ali – Module 3 › Reply To: Mohammed Ali – Module 3 April 28, 2014 at 10:03 pm #899 HennekeKeymaster You may want to try to get your average number of words down, and see what impact it has on your blog post. See which version you like. 9% for passive sentences is quite high. You want to kick a few passive sentences out. Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.
