I love the way you think, Mike! Your integrity and passion really show through. One thought that I had…your second paragraph is much more dynamic and interesting than your first. I wondered how it would look if you swapped them around. Henneke, what do you think? I just love the idea of the piece beginning on those strong notes.
Is your dream is to add as second location of your business model? The key to adding another location is a business model that you can replicate.
Think McDonalds. Holiday Inn. Hooters!
Also, should we be bold with each other’s work like this? As I said before, it helps me to try to critique others. Not sure how others feel or if I’m even on target.
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