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Reply To: Mary – Module 3

Home › Forums › Enchanting Business Blogging – Spring 2014 › Group A › Mary – Module 3 › Reply To: Mary – Module 3

April 30, 2014 at 10:38 am #929
Lori Sailiata
Lori Sailiata
Participant

I loved this, Mary! You certainly have a strong voice…and a lot to say. The most dynamic part of this for me was at the end. I loved the back-and-forth between you and Dan. I also loved the exchange between you and the doctor. You have a gift for showing-not-telling with those character “foils.” Fiction techniques in nonfiction can be quite delightful.


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