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Reply To: Lori–Module 3

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April 30, 2014 at 10:58 am #933
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Henneke
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Your stats are really good and I like how you’ve included the word “you” to make the text more engaging.

As the sentence “People want to seem important, because being important is too much work.” is critical, you may want to add extra stress like this:

People want to seem important. Because being important is too much work.

Well done.


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