Yes, that’s perfectly fine. Of course 🙂
There’s just one more opportunity here:
Current:
Is your dream to add as second location of your business model? The key to adding another location is a business model that you can replicate.
Think McDonalds. Holiday Inn. Hooters!
It is critical to know what factors are essential to your business’s success.
=> I’m not sure about your ideal reader for this blog post, but the two statements I highlighted in italics are both a little obvious to me. If you include too many obvious statements in your content, your reader may think you have nothing new to add. You can solve this by adding a question. For instance:
New option 1:
Is your dream to add as second location of your business model? The key to adding another location is a business model that you can replicate.
Think McDonalds. Holiday Inn. Hooters!
It is critical to know what factors are essential to your business’s success. Sounds obvious, doesn’t it? But somehow it’s more difficult than we often think.
New option 2:
Is your dream to add as second location of your business model?
Think McDonalds. Holiday Inn. Hooters!
You know you need a business model you can replicate. But how do you know what’s critical to your business’ success?
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.