My post had a lot of questions already, too, so again, I didn’t want to overkill.
Agreed. You worked hard enough at the start of the week 🙂
I like the changes you made. You might just want to add an if here:
New: Wouldn’t it be easy if all our college applicants were exactly the same?
And [if] they all applied to college straight out of high school?
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