Just have time to look at your remarks. You are right about the perfume reference, it can be dropped. I noticed that I tend to add extra information. You should see my first drafts!
The re-written alinea does read easier.
Should I now again rephrase this blog for even shorter sentences?
Last week I was at a conference and managed to do this post then the program got very busy and I was not able work on the course.
Just now I wanted to look at module 4 but it said I didn’t have access. Is this something that you did?
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