Just now I wanted to look at module 4 but it said I didn’t have access. Is this something that you did?
No, not sure why that would be. I’ll email you.
Don’t worry about rephrasing the whole post. You can do this if you’d like to (and if you have time), but we’ll do another assignment at the end of Module 4 and you can try this again with another post. .
If you like you could start with a question:
Have you ever wondered how the first goldsmiths made jewellery? [and then continue with your first sentence]
And you could introduce a question and shorter sentences here:
Both read like a comic book. It starts with weighing of the gold and then the processing steps in making jewellery.
Have you noticed how the picture reads like a comic book? First they weigh the gold. Then they chisel the gold. They file and polish the gold. Each step is carefully pictured.
This is how you can engage Sarah – just like you’d do if you were talking to her in real life.
Enchant readers. Woo customers. Win business.