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May 5, 2014 at 7:42 am
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Can you tell I started with sentence 3?
Yep. That’s why it’s a warming up exercise. 🙂
Good work on sentences 1 & 2. The best ones paint a vivid picture. Like these:
She felt like bringing his speech to a screeching halt by running up to him and shaking him violently. So he would stop. His droning voice. Forever.
The grubby coat and slimy hair made her wonder whether she could trust the salesman.
I am sorry to hear about your chest infection. Are you fully recovered now?
Looking forward to seeing you back soon! Good luck with teaching your corporate programme.
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